Thursday, May 20, 2010

CP5080/CP5090 Presentation Feedback

Got my feedback for my presentations today, finally. (Paper Presentation: XML Compression Techniques and Paper Presentation: Virtual GIS)

Was good to see the feedback as I wasn't sure how I had been doing.

A few interesting points. Need to address that concern over colloquial expressions.
Hi Angela, here are some comments on your cp5090 presentations so far.

1. very good use of slides, except for an occasional tendency to present a slide that is extracted from a paper with far too much detail. If you need to discuss that much information you will have to find some way to summarize or otherwise digest it within a few slides.

2. generally very good at pacing and keeping your talk on track.

3. You are a bit careless in diction and locution (word choice and manner of speech). Informality is OK but don't slide into purely colloquial expressions.

4. Very good attention to paper's structure and meta data.

Overall grade: D.

Bruce

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